"UNCOMMON SENSE"--Once More with Feeling

    I've posted this article before, but in view of the current geopolitical circumstances, it feels more relevant than ever. In this version, I've added responses from essays written by sophomores from English classes at Fremont High School to whom we presented the vision.

    As I continue to immerse myself in commentaries, literature, and a wide range of perspectives, I am still struck by the lack of  what John Naisbitt called a "Strategic Vision." 

    So, I've spent the last 30-40 years working on that strategic vision--I believe what you will read here can provide some of the roots from which we can grow a more viable, user friendly culture. 

    I believe that we cannot "figure out" solutions or create "policies" to implement them. The solutions must be grown. We have to think in terms of, at the very least, decades. Therefore it is incumbent upon us to develop an approach to education that will prepare youth to be the aware and compassionate leaders who are committed to our mission-herewith presented.

    Since young people do not exist outside of the contexts of family, media, schools, peer relationships and, for some, religious life, we must work within these various contexts to achieve our goals.

This essay is divided into 4 parts:    

1.      Intro to the vision
2.      The vision
3.      Strategies for implementation.
4.      Excerpts from essays written by students from American High School in Fremont, CA who were exposed to the vision and the uniquely creative ways it was presented to them.

Read on.

UNCOMMON SENSE…

A Strategic Vision for Revitalizing Our Commitment to the American Mission

By Errol Strider

“Society is produced by our wants, and government by our wickedness; the former promotes our Positively by uniting our affections, the latter Negatively by restraining our vices. The one encourages intercourse, the other creates distinctions. The first a patron, the last a punisher.”  Common Sense by Thomas Paine

            "American needs to recover its mythic dimension.”

                 The American Soul by Jacob Needleman

“What we lack is an evolved sense of our collective purpose for our talent and intelligence.    .......it  feels as though there is no unified social force field for the effort, no number to call, no place to sign up.”

Healing of America by Marianne Williamson

               

               

            America has a mission statement.  Little known or recognized and rarely embraced, but nevertheless, we, “United States-ans” do indeed have a mission statement. 

            What is the significance of that? In his book, Peak Performers, Charles Garfield identified the characteristics of peak performers—people who are highly successful in their respective fields.  At the top of the list was the fact that each of them had a mission, a strong sense of purpose that they envisioned bringing about through their work or enterprise…and not to just to make a lot of money or be famous.  No, each of them had a mission to, in some way; make a difference through their product or service.  And, invariably that mission was tied to a value that these leaders wanted to promulgate through their enterprise. With Ray Krock, who started McDonald’s, it was cleanliness.  With the founder of Dow chemical it was safety.  With, Tom Watson, the founder of IBM it was service.  With J.C. Penny, whose stores were originally called “The Golden Rule” stores; it was “Doing unto others, as you would have them do unto you.”  *High-faluten notions?  Wait.....

This is not to say their talent, business expertise and the rightness of their products for their time weren’t important factors.  But what is significant here is that they had a sense of mission.  They had purpose.  And in Garfield’s analysis, this value-based mission was not only first on the list of peak performers, but was the most consistent, and in some ways, the most crucial factor. *why

            What is vital to recognize here is that though personal gain is no doubt a significant factor in these peak performers’ motivation, it wasn’t necessarily the dominant factor.  Certainly, they sought wealth and they believed in their product and service, but they also were committed to a way of delivering that product or service that added value.

Having a shared mission is of enormous value. The advantage of a mission is that it provides a benchmark, a way to measure how we are doing.  It offers direction, purpose, and a sense of belonging. And if we truly believe in our mission, it can motivates us and fuel our drive to achieve it.  In short, it helps us function at a level of peak performance.

            Right now, America has little unifying sense of direction, no universal and consistent moral compass, no compelling reason for many of its citizens to actively participate in our republic. In fact, we are a very contentious, divided people--quick to blame, dominate and litigate.  There is a sense of entitlement.  In short, we are a very immature species.

To the extent that we lack a clear sense of purpose to which we can collectively agree, America is floundering idealistically. We are an indifferent, complacent, greedy, fractious and narcissistic citizenry. In fact, one very telling sign that we are off course is that we don’t even see ourselves as a “citizenry,” but more as an “economy.” We are “consumers” first and “citizens” secondly…if at all.  Our criteria for success are more about becoming “competitive” than being “cooperative.” Beyond self interest with its different values systems competing for our souls, we do not appear to have a clear vision, a pragmatic idealism…something we can collectively aspire to.

“Ideas may take origin in the stimuli of the outer world, but ideals are born only in the creative realms of the inner world. Today the nations of the world are directed by men who have a superabundance of ideas, but they are poverty-stricken in ideals. That is the explanation of poverty, divorce, war, and racial hatreds.” The Urantia Book, p.1219

Many forces vie for our attention, our loyalty, our votes, our dollars, and devotion; but collectively, we do not seem to have a common goal that can bind us and energize us with enthusiasm for who we are as Americans and where America is headed, and, by implication, where America, with all her power and influence, is leading the world.

            And mostly, we are cynical.  There is a derisive undercurrent of, “Yeah, right” that pervades our cultural consciousness.  We don’t seem to expect the best from ourselves.  Idealists are derided as “un-realists.”  Oh, there are those, especially in the political arena who put on the face of “Aren’t we Americans great and don’t we know what we’re doing?”  But as any of the cynical people can point out, that is just the painted-on high gloss stain laid over a highly blemished cultural psyche.

And can a community really thrive without a pragmatic idealism?  Could the founding “parents” of this country have done what they did if they didn’t have some idealism?

            What supports this cynicism, this anti-idealism, if you will, is a sense of having been consistently betrayed which in turn erodes trust and replaces it with wariness and suspicion, if not out right hostility.  How can ideals grow in the soil of so much cynicism?  And how can we expect anything other than cynicism in the face of so much ugliness and betrayal? If our ideals and our best sense of who we are and what we are capable of betray us, then inevitably we will become, if not cynical, then angry and paranoid, or we fall into denial and even self-betrayal (see James Hillman’s article on “Betrayal”)

Our Mission:

            Well, guess what? Buried in our national literature, usually glossed over, taken-for-granted, casually crossed off as so much hyperbole is our national mission statement. Yes, we have a clear, concise mission statement that identifies six very specific goals (agendas) for our country…to which we are called to manifest.  Indeed, I would suggest that it is the active participation in achieving our six goals that truly makes us—and to the degree that we are participating in achieving these goals--we can proudly call ourselves, Americans.

            So I hope that by now, I have piqued your interest and you’re asking, “Okay already, what is the mission?”  If this occurs to you, take a second to notice whether or not you even know what it is.  No blame.  Neither do most of the rest of the many people I’ve asked.  It’s a question of positioning.  When you see what our mission is, when you hear it spoken, when you feel the energy of the mission as our shared purpose as Americans, you will appreciate that it is the great dark horse of our collective American Soul.

            “So what is it already?”

“We, the People of the United States, in order to form a more perfect union, establish justice, insure domestic tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general welfare and secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity do”…

Our Mission is to…..

·         form a more perfect union - be united

·         establish justice - be just

·         insure domestic tranquility - be peaceful

·         provide for the common defense - be safe and  secure

·         promote the general welfare - be healthy

·         secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity - be free

Please note that I have simplified our mission into the following six goals: to become more unified, just, peaceful, secure, healthy and free.  Later I will develop each of these goals in more detail and how they capture the essence of the goals as stated in the more poetic language of the preamble.

        That’s it, our mission statement… eloquently and explicitly stated in the Preamble to the United States Constitution.  By and large, we have focused on what has become the political and governing vehicle for the fulfillment of that mission, the Constitution, and left it up to politicians and lawyers and those who can most influence them to be responsible for achieving the mission, if indeed it is even on the radar of their aspirations.  And, as most would agree, it is money and power that does the controlling and the influencing and will continue to do so until a critical mass of Americans develop the will to do things differently. 

           

So what would it take to awaken and harness that Will.  What can we as a citizenry do about it? The answer to those questions is the whole point of this manifesto.

    We must realize that while the constitution provides the skeleton and structure of our government, the responsibility for the mission goes far beyond what can be achieved through legislative and political manipulations. The responsibility, and just as importantly, the opportunities to fulfill that mission still rest in the hands and hearts of every American citizen.

THESIS: This extraordinary mission deserves to be resurrected from cliché, extracted from the cobwebs of neglect, retrieved from the attic of indifference, wrestled from the clutches of power brokers, brought to our attention, and actively and passionately embraced as our collective purpose, especially, if we are to successfully navigate our way through the inevitable perils that the 21^st century promises us.

 We must consider what it would take for each of us to actively commit to that vision and do whatever we can to understand it, flesh it out, and ultimately take all necessary steps to fulfill that mission.  We must learn to see how our self-interest and the achievement of our mission are inextricably bound—as one goes, so goes the other.  There is no separation.  And we must learn how to do this together.

             

    Our mission identifies six very explicit goals that our founding parents set out to achieve through the establishment of our country and its government through the U.S. constitution. These goals need to be re-framed in order to activate and empower us. Given a chance, they have the power to call forth our best nature and to provide a unifying direction so that we can progress and heal the many divisions in our American Community and more effectively deal with the variety of problems that plague us both here and around the globe.

I believe that once we recognize we have a mission, and clearly demonstrate what each of us can actually do about it, we will be able to enlist Americans of all walks of life and all ages in this noble undertaking. And as we do, we make it possible for ourselves and our posterity to reap the harvest …to unearth the bounty of blessing that waits within the treasure chest that is the heart of the United States, the American Spirit.

When people see that, regardless of the circumstances of their lives, they can actually make a contribution to our future, they'll be able to transcend the feelings of helplessness in the face of seemingly overwhelming dominate forces.  They will be charged with the inspiration, passion and wisdom to actually redirect our course towards a higher and better quality of life for more and more citizens.

Our mission provides a springboard for all those disillusioned, latent idealists among us to dive in and take responsibility for our collective welfare. It can counteract the feelings of impotence that under gird our cynicism, undermine our optimism, delimit our motivation and that enslaves our will.     The commitment to our mission can fuel the determination it takes to make our American society work. And it can inspire the creativity that is required to make an America that exists for the good of all, in short, to promote the general welfare with a passionate resolve.

WHAT’S IN THE WAY?

“The only things that can stop us are fear, ignorance, self-centeredness, and greed.”   

          The New American Story by Bill Bradley

Along with unbridled self-interest, I believe the feelings of individual impotence combined with cynicism and an extreme degree of disconnection (from ourselves, each other, our own bodies, the environment and the essential nature and fundamental principles of what makes life work and the “one God” we are supposedly “under”) are the greatest obstacles to progress and progress is, as I am suggesting for Americans, the realization of our shared mission—a more perfect union, continually evolving toward increased unity, justice, peace, security, health and liberty.

What I hope to achieve with this manifesto is twofold: to counteract the prevailing impotence and cynicism that sabotage our idealism and undermine our creative abilities to achieve our goals and to show how, as we build a network of Americans committed to our mission, we can radically change the quality of life in this country, the nature of our influence on the world and (by the way) secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity.

I will show how connectedness is the most vital activity that we can cultivate to empower us to achieve our mission. I will also offer strategies and a vision for both building a network establishing those vital connections. In addition, I will attempt to show how our six goals are still the most important targets for our collective efforts and hopefully awaken a sense of hope and empowerment so that we can achieve our purposes.

In short, I will provide a strategic vision, including a number of tactics that can be implemented by good hearted, caring and open minded Americans.

Many people do care about where we are headed and about the serious problems that plague and frustrate us, but feel powerless to do anything about it.  I believe that they certainly would care about our mission… if they recognized it as such. Many people feel helpless in the face of the overwhelming forces that seem to control our lives.  As a result they close off into their own private universe of family, job, friends, self-preservation and self-gratification… largely missing the opportunity to make a real difference to our community. Furthermore, they are unable to realize the sense of empowerment and pride when one realizes that he or she has something important to contribute, that will actually make a positive and palpable difference to the quality of life.

I think this perspective is especially relevant to young adults, who, hopefully, haven’t been completely overcome by cynicism and who still, if only vaguely, harbor some desire to make a difference with their lives and their talents.

Fortunately, our mission isn’t limited to young or old or to either conservatives or liberals or even politicians and their supporters …or any other way you can cut up the demographics of Americana. No, all you have to is be an American and recognize the value of achieving our mission for it to be relevant to you and to empower your life as a citizen. And the more we can see the connection between achieving these ideals and solving our personal problems, the more motivated and effective we will become in accomplishing both our practical and idealistic objectives.

       Now, it isn’t so much that the mission statement is not being attended to, but rather that it isn’t being recognized as our purpose and thus we miss out on the incredible motivating force that comes with having a clear, inspiring and shared intention.

(For example, just look at what we were able to accomplish in World War II when our resources were galvanized around the mission of defeating the Axis Powers—the sacrifices people made and the incredible amount of resolve that determined our capacity to emerge victorious.  But so far, it seems that that level of commitment only shows up when we are faced with “an enemy” something that needs to be stopped or overcome? Is that what it takes to motivate us?  Do we have to be so confronted by threat that we can only rise up when we are in resistance or can we ignite our will to bring something positive about with determination, foresight and strategic design?)

Now mind you, there will be all sorts of interpretations of our mission and ways of understanding it as well as other numerous ideas of how we might fulfill it, but that’s good, that’s what makes American great. While it certainly isn't going to be easy, we can take advantage of our diversity and the myriad of perspectives that can only enrich the debate and the resultant creative process that we must be engaged in to bring our mission to fruition.   As one would expect, entrenched powers, the status quo and cultural conditioning will resist the kind of changes that will inevitably come about.

But if there is no overriding direction that we can all agree to, then our differences serve only to separate us. This leads to endless rancor, disrespect and lack of cooperation, and oh, yes, endless yelling matches, name calling and the putting down of our opponents on TV talk shows and call-in radio and through the media, which further exacerbates our divisiveness and does little to empower our unity.  After all, the word, “United” sits firmly as the very first word in the very name of our republic. (The United States of America” in case you need to be reminded.)  How many other functioning nations are named after a process, a way of being together as a nation of peoples?

What I am suggesting here is that we recognize that we have a vital mission to bring about greater unity, justice, peace, security, health and freedom, to see how these attributes are at the true center of our lives and then for each of us look into our hearts, find out how much we care and commit some portion of our energy to fulfilling that mission—that we take some responsibility for our collective purpose. By doing this, we will begin to see how, by our working to fulfill our shared mission, we end up inevitably fulfilling ourselves and our individual life purpose, and especially, to see how we can make it possible for our children, our grand children and their children to live in a better America and as a result, a better world.

        By informing Americans that we have a mission, we can begin to, at least, have a conversation and, as a consequence of that, hopefully, to start mobilizing our talents, intelligence, energy and resources to take more conscious steps to bring that mission closer to actualization.

        In this essay, I will present some strategies to achieve our vision, some ways to get started and even how we might more passionately and effectively enhance whatever we are already doing to fulfill that mission, but I believe that if the 300 million of us knew that we have a mission and put our collective imaginations together, we could make an extraordinary difference in improving the quality of our lives. 

      Or to be more practical…if…say 5% of American families committed 5% of their time to this mission in concrete ways, then we could make major strides toward our goals and see significant accomplishments in a relatively short period of time…in just a few generations. (Yes, we have to think in terms of generations to come, just as our founding parents did—they didn’t conceive of and design the Constitution to just meet quarterly profits. After all, what made our “Forefathers” forefathers? They had foresight.) 

        Now, as I said before, it’s not that people aren’t working on this mission.  Many people are, in their own way, with passion and intelligence, but the problem is that few people in the public discourse seem to recognize it as our mission. And, all too often their efforts are limited to that part of our mission that most relates to their own issues.

Or, people do not in any way participate in fulfilling our mission and leave it to the government and the political process, which they only marginally participate in, and inevitably leave it up to well financed special interests to influence our direction and to decide our fate. 

To fuel our passion for the mission and to see it more quickly expedited, we cannot limit our efforts to the political process. (Why?--more later) First, it must become intensely personal.  We must find a way to relate it to the very real issues of our lives—to what we as individuals, families, organizations and communities want and need, to what bothers and frustrates us and, at least as important, as a way of satisfying an even deeper need to find meaning for our lives and to secure a free and sustainable future for “posterity.”.

Essentially, fulfilling our purpose is not limited to politics or economics though those realms seem to be primary arenas in which we engage whatever is relevant to our mission.  Fundamentally, it is about life. (Remember, the Declaration of Independence starts with “the pursuit of life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness.”) In order to stimulate the kind of ardor required to actualize that mission, we must see how our own best interests are served by a commitment to that mission, that the achievement of our heartfelt desires is proportionately realized as we actively and collectively engage in the achievement of our shared purpose.  We must realize that fundamentally there is no real separation between the part and the whole.  As one goes, so goes the other and that any effort on behalf of the whole will affect the part. 

        I want to challenge people to embrace the mission, to enter into discussion and debate about it, and to see how creative we can be in implementing the strategies that it will take to fulfill the mission, to quit bickering (no matter how well conflict sells) and start using our creative imagination to heal our lives. My goal with this essay is to move our American mission way up on the priority list of what engages our interest and passion, even to the point that we will not only get involved, but are willing to sacrifice some of our personal agendas for the sake of this mission. I believe that as we do this, we will rise out of our cynicism, regain the American Spirit and become the light of the world that a society devoted to “a more perfect union” and “the blessings of liberty” can become.

  

Why is having a mission so important?

·         Without a mission we have no direction and without direction we are adrift, left to the vagaries of forces to control our destiny and shape our lives…forces that may not have our best interests at heart.

·         Without a mission we create unnecessary suffering and many people are dis-empowered and much damage is done to our environment and our future.

What is accomplished by having a mission?

·         Our mission shows us where we’re headed and provides a vision towards which we aspire

·         Our mission unites us.

·         Our mission provides a way to realize and appreciate a sense of commonality and community

·         Our mission provides a criteria by which we can resolve our differences

·         Our mission inspire us and gives meaning and purpose to our lives

How will a campaign to revitalize our commitment to our American mission work?

·         We inform people that we have this mission and inspire them to pursue it

·         We help people to recognize and appreciate the value of our mission and how it relates to the quality of their lives

·         We get people involved in conversations and activities about what that mission means and what is needed to fulfill it, to explore together the issues of how we’re doing, what is in our way, how we deal with that and what needs to happen to bring it about.

·         We develop strategies and tools to facilitate people’s involvement in helping to achieve our mission.

           

What can people do about it?

·         We assist people in recognizing how their individual attitudes, behaviors and values can contribute to the accomplishment of our mission especially in the family system.

·         We help people to experience how effective and powerful they can be in their everyday lives to achieve our American goals.

·         We provide avenues, vehicles and tools for people to get involved and make a difference including the following:

Five Point Plan: The play’s the thing wherein I'll catch the conscience of the king” --Hamlet

1. Produce television programming and videos using the internet devoted to the American Mission…including…

         A Family Television Comedy Show Let’s Make it…America (combination of interview show, reality TV, Saturday Night Live {with substantive content} and Sesame Street for the whole family… based on the exploration of our six American goals/values and

         Commercials, YouTube, Face book, and Twitter postings that elucidate and celebrate the six aspects of the American mission (get corporate sponsorship)

        

2. Leadership training programs where we educate people in how to lead America toward the fulfillment of our mission-- including the development of a curriculum targeted to high school and college-age Americans where they can explore our six American goals
3. Create summer family camps where families can come together to celebrate and explore these American values in natural environments and through interactive family programs (examples available)
4. Produce a touring “revival” across the United States, featuring a Musical Play called, “Let’s Make It…America”… that celebrates these six American values and through workshops, offers people an opportunity to find out more about these fundamental American principles and help them discover creative and practical ways to get involved.
5. Grow a network of Americans committed to the mission:
1. U-ACT… “United American Community Trust”—American Families committed to the American Mission

 Criteria for Membership in the American Community Network 

·         You believe that a united America is stronger than a divided America

·         You recognize that we have an American Mission and you devote some part of your life to it on an ongoing and active basis.

·         You recognize American’s responsibility to positively affect the rest of the world and future generations and how by fulfilling our American mission, we can fulfill that responsibility

·         To fuel your motivation, you see how our mission affects your life and those you are in a position to influence

·         You are willing to explore new options for how we might achieve our mission.

·         You are willing to consider other people’s point of view and to engage in honest, open minded and respectful exploration and examination of the meaning of our six mission goals.

·         You don’t take your self too seriously—stay humble and firmly avoid self-righteousness.

·         You recognize and work toward the goal of keeping these six goals in balance.

            Now, while each person will have their own understanding (and hopefully an evolving one) of what these six goals mean, what they look like, and what it takes to achieve them, I would like to suggest the following as descriptive of the American people as we become more fully realized:

Form a perfect union = We are UNITED

Establish Justice = We are JUST

Insure domestic tranquility = We are PEACEFUL

Provide for the Common defense = We are SAFE and SECURE

Promote the General welfare = We and our environment are HEALTHY

Secure the Blessings of liberty = We are FREE

Key:     All of these worthy and necessary goals must be kept in balance, which is the responsibility both citizens and our leadership, economic, educational and political.

We must progress with equal attentiveness on all six areas-unity, justice, peace, security, health and freedom- and keep them growing without an undue emphasis of one over the other.  For instance, when we make security (as in “National Security”) dominant over health or unity, peace or justice, progress of our American culture is crippled. Think of it like a 6 legged stool. If one or two are emphasized over the others, the stool is not only wobbly, but is likely to collapse, especially when you put on our government the enormous weight of responsibility to implement, safeguard and manage the call of the U.S. constitution.

        While there is obviously much more to this concept than what I have included here, I hope I have shared enough to whet your appetite and see this campaign as a viable approach to get American on course toward achieving the supernal objectives stated in the Preamble to our Constitution...

         I look forward to exploring in more details the following critical questions and issues:

• Why it is so important to plant these values early on in children’s lives
• How and why to get young adults involved
• Why and how t interactive family programs can be a crucial environment to educate people to the realities of our mission quest.
• How the entertainment approach through television and other media will work
• The design of the interactive family programs and family camps and how they stimulate people to explore and become devoted to our American values
• How to bring this campaign about in the face of forces that will resist its success
• Why it is so necessary to engage and mollify the “shadow” side of the American psyche and how to do that effectively through creative communication tools including the use of humor, art, therapy as needed and discourse.
• Fund-raising
• Leadership
• How to grow a Network of Families committed to our American vision
• Etc…

        If you’re paying attention to what is happening in the world, you can readily see that a radical shift is required, not so unlike the times when Thomas Paine wrote his pamphlet, Common  Sense.  You may have been stumped as to what can be done.  I hope you will give this treatment serious reflection and see it as a realistic and viable means for accelerating consciousness and applying that enlightened awareness to the solving our imminent and future challenges.

     I look forward to engaging in a deeper examination of the potentiality of this strategic vision.

“Minds in agreement form the most powerful force in the universe.   To harness that force would constitute not so much a bridge as a super sonic transport into the 21st century.” 

            “They want to feel that they are contributing to a larger process, something bigger than themselves.”

           From Healing of America by Marianne Williamson

           

Appendix:

            The following are excerpts from essays written by sophomore students for their English class based on their reaction to a workshop my wife and I did for them and their families, “Let’s Make it America.”

            I include these excerpts because, though anecdotal, their reactions suggest that young people are open and responsive to the call of the American mission if presented in a dynamic, vivid, experiential and fun way—the keys to a successful communication of the principles.

            Just so you don’t miss the irony…..This program took place at American High School in Fremont, CA, arguable the most ethnically diverse community in Northern, if not all of, California.

Extra credit essays from the students from an English class at American High School, Fremont, CA

“Through the activities that we did, I discovered many things that were personally meaningful.... this made me realize how acting as a whole rather than separate parts, we can contribute so much to our entire nation.  This is when I discovered that change starts with yourself.  In my family, we tend to keep to ourselves, letting only the very close 'outsiders' in.  If we were more unified with our families and friends, we could be the first step to making our entire nation come together.  It also made me realize how important it is not to succumb to racial profiling... From now on... I will stop 'judging books by their covers' and get to know a person before making any opinions about them.... it was amazing seeing how many people felt so similarly to me.  I was personally touched... it seemed as though everyone family was its own little nation, precisely following America's mission statement.  This made me realize how my family wisdom could be taken and applied to the United States of America in order to help it achieve unification, piece, justice, health and freedom." Ali O.

"Some of the parents said, afterwards, how they felt a really good connection with the students that they hadn't felt before.  We were able to find out that some of our goals and prerogatives were really quite similar... the way they provided to project the country's goals to us was very clear, concise, and very easy to understand.  It made me think about 'bigger picture' and how small my goals might have compared to the country's more general, bigger goal that applied to the whole country instead of just one person.” Vivian R.

            "Sitting in the audience listening to them perform and reveal the movement of America today made me realize that accomplishing all of this takes strength and unity.  One person is unable to make a difference; we need to be united for this to be achievement.  We have to work it out together and in order for that to happen and it has to start in our hearts.  It seems simple, but it takes a lot of work.  We, everyone in the audience, everyone right now, we are all the future of America.

            "When I arrived to the show, I expected to be bored and leave wondering about what I was going to eat when I got home, but I ended up gaining something more than just that.  The performance opened my eyes and exposed the vision of today -- the need for people to work together to make America a better place.  When I was in the audience,... We all felt safe connected and bonded in some sort of way.

"I really gained much more than I thought I would... I came with knowledge, but I left with real wisdom.” Kelly C.

            "The idea of a mission statement sounded like something from a James Bond film, but it ended up being the first part of the preamble.  It allowed me to think about what America is truly about how goals created a long time ago are still supposed to be an action today.  The thought of that captivated me to wondering about how well the government and people of that country are working together to make it happen."   Brian N.

            "Personally, when I first came into the rotunda, I felt that the presentation was going to be a total waste of time.  After all, the only reason that took two hours out of my evenings, so I can get extra credit since my grade was not where I wanted it to be.  It must have been a blessing that my grade was low, therefore pushing me to come to an event that changed my views about the responsibilities that we as Americans have.

"When Errol started to introduce the preamble of the Constitution, I felt a little bored.  However, after he started to act out the skits with Rochelle, I was pretty much laughing my head off.  There were two skits that I remember very clearly because it meant a lot to me.  First one was the one about peace, or our own Rochelle had an escalating argument about who started the peace.  What I can from that is that peace is not a single person trait; peace can only be obtained through a group of people.  If one person states that he or she is the one that brings the piece, in truth, there is no peace at all.  Only when peace is brought together, can a group of people say that they brought the peace together.    Jason H.

            "... the presentation left an overall enriching experience for me.  I was introduced to concepts and responsibilities that I never knew even existed.  It really broadened my view on the United States of America and pushed me to pursue this mission in order to allow myself and future generations to enjoy the blessings that we have right now.  If this mission is not taken on, we risk not having such rights in the future; therefore, I made a vow that night, to use my best effort to take on the responsibilities of the preamble of the United States Constitution."

            "the patriotic show presented by Errol and Rochelle Strider was a good starting to get American high school families more involved in their country."   Michelle B.

            "Honestly, before Errol and Rochelle's presentation, I cared much more about my low grade than America's mission statement.  At the beginning, I really didn't take them seriously due to their hilarious attacks.  However by the end of the night I was fully aware and concerned about our nation's mission statement.... I felt that Errol and Rochelle did an excellent job in... explaining the preamble, our mission statement, to us.

            "Through the whole explanation of an extraordinary mission that has been cast away as a cliché, Errol and Rochelle kept their audience occupied, entertainment and engaged.... it really got me thinking about my values and beliefs and gave me insight to how the rest of America, or at least a small portion of students that attend American high school, feel about the same values and beliefs.

            "Clearly, this night turned out to be more than the mere extra credit points that I will receive for attending, but a lesson in the mission of America and an inspiration for me to do whatever I can to achieve our mission as well as spread the awareness of this goal to others."   Dominick L.

            "Their professional comedic act and unexpected performance had me interested until the end, and opened my mind to the real message they were trying to convey.

            "We must also learn to be outspoken, so that we can stand up for what's right, and perhaps move others to join us in our goal to complete the mission.”   Clifton  N.

            "... extremely different from any other presentation I've been to.  It would have been impossible for anyone to ignore them.  Every moment was filled up with some activity to watch, listen to, or participate in.... It made me feel happier."  

            “……an occasion that made everybody look inside him or herself and rethink some of their goals for life.... realized that I was a citizen of the United States and therefore I have an obligation to uphold certain virtues and ideals.  I was impressed by the preamble of the Constitution being turned into a mission statement.  I felt that if the message could be spread that the preamble of our Constitution contains the principles that our founding fathers wanted us to follow many more people would think about how they've could become part of America's mission.  I feel the need now to become more involved with charity and to connect myself to the world."   Rohun P.